A challenge on Raw Em0tion recently was to submit a poem that had 5 or more alliterative lines. Here is my submission:
I never knew
You never were
And hated hearing empty words
Feeling every emptiness
Like bitter bounds of joy
I never knew
You couldn’t be
Something that meant more to me
Another status quo, it seems
I never knew you were.
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Tuesday, 19 February 2008
I never knew, You never were
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